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Open Poetry #34
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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-11-23 07:45 PM

Understanding understands your vibrations
Echoing twanging twitching
Masked within control
Taught through aeons
You dance a tight rope
Tight between two egos
Quivering
And pausing to disconnect both ends
You plummet
To a scream of fire
And fear as gravity
Exerts it's pull
On your minds

To land

In perhaps a deep hole

Or perhaps

You really flew
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1 posted 2004-11-23 07:47 PM

excellent last line!
DavePage
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2 posted 2004-11-23 07:51 PM

I suppose they always land in my poems

I am just a great bit softy on women

Dave
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