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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Picture perfect from the heart weedless sprout from the start yet headless one can say too optimistic one fine day Wholesome images projected detract from ones later infected when a day's sharpness fades to grey and the lines of youth begin to fray... Blue overalls tend to garden chores their knees rub on hardwood floors a days clarity helps keep perspective foils grey days, imbued in defectives Picture perfect from the start a wholesome person from the heart integral from head to toe displays even as the lines of beauty stray... [This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-26-2004 10:02 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a wonderful write, enjoyed the read, and especially the last lines |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Enjoyed~  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Thanks Alli and Passing, good holiday weekend to you both  |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Another beautiful one Martin. :-) Within this heart you'll find love |
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