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Open Poetry #34

A Minor Affair

IndigoEve
Member

since 2003-01-10

Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time

0 posted 2004-11-28 10:25 AM

I have stolen
your husband
when inside your bed

with whom
you were probably
waiting
to expose

Forgive me,
he was so forceful
so heated
and so deep.

If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

1 posted 2004-11-28 10:32 AM

A quicky but satisfying.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2004-11-28 11:57 AM

A firestorm here Eve...brief and all encompassing.
Brilliant write.
TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-12-11 09:13 AM

understanding

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

4 posted 2005-01-23 03:43 PM

oh damn! i love this.

and i'm sort of feeling like a stalker reading all i can find that you've shared. lol :-)

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2005-01-23 04:58 PM

feel this one. nice

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

6 posted 2005-01-23 05:30 PM

This is so simply complicated.

I really enjoy your writing....very much.

Robert

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2005-01-23 09:33 PM

and...dessert.

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