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Open Poetry #34
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Juju
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In your dreams
0 posted 2004-12-02 08:43 AM


"Air"


I know you almost touched me.
But yet you really couldn't.
I wouldn't of even known,
If it wasn't for the feeling
the presence your hand near me.
It was a breeze at my side
But it was just only air
And about like your presence
Your hand wasn't even there.
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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2004-12-02 10:58 AM

a wish maybe?

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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
2 posted 2004-12-02 12:35 PM

Yess and no

It is kinda more like ===== Its complacated
ok yes.
Your right like always


Juju
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