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Open Poetry #34
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2004-12-02 07:34 PM


To see the robe
in a piece of cloth.

A mantle within the rag.

And find without the aid of silk

the aspects
of a king.
© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
RSWells
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since 2001-06-17
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1 posted 2004-12-02 08:10 PM

A beauty right out of thin air this.
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-12-03 12:44 PM

neat write!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-12-03 12:45 PM

Exquisite piece of writing.
Well done sir.
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2004-12-03 12:50 PM


I applaud this fine piece of sagaceous writing!



Love & Light,
EA
Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-05-15 09:05 PM

read and i like it.
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