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Open Poetry #34

the writer’s spell

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2004-12-06 10:14 AM

crashed.

the thoughts…
they are crashed
in a fall.

hole me.

bear the way of the fled.

a moan split in pieces
to be invisible and…    beautiful.

i know the scam.
never mine
to belong as a child’s toy
but a borrowed play

for the holed.

scattered
the I.
i see  it
a ramble of a hide
smiling away

touching the senses
with residual feel of virtual presence

never mine…

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2004-12-06 10:21 AM

"i know the scam.
never mine
to belong as a child’s toy
but a borrowed play"

this i KNOW...sorry...h

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2004-12-06 12:09 PM

missing pieces
yet your still there

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2004-12-07 10:59 PM

You are astounding....like everything I've seen from you, this is an experience even more than a poem, for anybody who can release to it instead of trying to impose their expectations on it.

That won't be for everybody, but it's something I truly value.

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-12-08 05:18 AM

a moan split in pieces
to be invisible and… beautiful.

incredible write...incredible

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2004-12-08 11:01 AM

Excellent write... I'm always drawn to the spells your words cast. *S*

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