Yet Another Dream completed

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Open Poetry #34

Yet Another Dream completed

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-12-11 06:12 PM

Slipping across my mind
Your image a band saw
As your eyes sing as a grating cheese cutter losing its edge
For those you fell
Who attended your ego and memories
On a cool evening and for them
Yet another dream

She always did like flowers
The Park never missed them
On Friday nights fish
No matter where I left them
I was always home early
And locked up behind me
I never woke her up
Nor did I let dawn blind me
To
Yet another dream

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-12-11 07:23 PM

interesting - i enjoy your unique style and eye upon things -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-12-11 08:16 PM

I let images drive my fingers I suppose.

Ideas that are often many poems or their seed.

I need to work on this a lot but I suppose I like to throw draft ideas out to make me jump over a hurdle of whether I do some work or put them away fron another time.

Thanks Susan

I do enjoy your writing.

Dave

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