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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2004-12-15 10:56 AM

Verse play unfolding intention
Neatly…lovingly
Offering a feast
From a book
Hand-silk screened swans
Like pharaohs on white Arabians
Swimming in fire
I can taste his surround
Like evening air
Licking light from his mouth
We curl in spearmint grass
Keeping cosmic balance
Pure spiritual form….
Wondering if I died
Or walking reborn
It is the flowers that considers words
New cultural heritage
Fall festival of new pages
Dog-eared passion
Into riddled explanations
Trotting like a story from Hamlet
I unleash an endangered species
Only to find prenatal cries
Of a child....
Voice of desire
Full throated and waiting
For clear breasted suckling
Softly whispering
“teach me”?
Laying my heart on the chest of life

ShiningWindHaze
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 138
California, United States

1 posted 2004-12-15 11:57 AM

Very emotional and passionate. Much enjoyed.

- Haze

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-12-15 11:58 AM

Laying my heart on the chest of life

That line alone is pure perfection Lee.
I l o v e d this!!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2004-12-16 08:29 PM

Enjoyed...James

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

4 posted 2004-12-16 08:33 PM

sweet. i liked this.

LOR

you're the only one keeping me alive

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2004-12-16 10:01 PM

sounds like love without chains,
full of possibility and the feeling of free

ahhhhhhh
can it really be??????

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-12-17 11:14 AM

ah sigh

yes

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2004-12-17 11:22 AM

LeeJ

Yes, Passionate and so beautiful!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2004-12-17 03:04 PM

It is the flowers that considers words

Absolutely love this line.

Enjoyed LeeJ

Maree

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2004-12-17 03:11 PM

"We curl in spearmint grass
Keeping cosmic balance
Pure spiritual form…."

~ Yes! Yes! Yes!

Love & Starlight,
Linda

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

10 posted 2004-12-17 08:19 PM

Beautiful write LeeJ!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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