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Open Poetry #34

Sugarplums Dancing

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2004-12-18 02:21 PM

spread        your

         joy

not to          every

just            this

        boy

and       sugarplums

dancing        all

the            winter

      night

[This message has been edited by James_A_Fraser (12-18-2004 03:49 PM).]

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2004-12-18 08:41 PM

Jamie

It is a joy to see them dancing and to hear the beautiful music they dance to. I wish the boy to have this joy.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-12-18 09:40 PM

nicely crafted

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2004-12-21 01:51 PM

It is easy to read this as whimsical and lighthearted... especially with a format that dances on the screen. But it's every bit as easy to read it as a bleak prayer...

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