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Open Poetry #34
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pandonov
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since 2003-10-03
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b/w conscience and insolence
0 posted 2004-12-21 05:52 AM

rain falls
forcing lines to move.
scattered faces
gambling through smooth drops.
cold and heavy
the character of the rain  
warms
my hungry eyes for
non-monotony.
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Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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1 posted 2004-12-21 08:01 AM

I found this most interesting.

Are you saying the rain makes you hungry for more than you have?

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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
2 posted 2004-12-21 10:15 AM

in a way, but more like for something... different
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