exhale
Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada
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2004-12-27
06:39 PM
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standing next to you my hands quivering the snow is falling i dance i dance this familiar pattern of love is it love? maybe these feelings are exagerated because you're next to me right here right now then the world the world stops turning you face is next to mine and then it's not like you were a snowflake melted on my cheek not meant to be anything more
i'm sorry it's been so long.
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DavePage
Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917
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2004-12-27
06:54 PM
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I did substitute refrigerated for exagerated
Good simply words hard hitting yes talent
Dave
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garysgirl
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
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2004-12-28
02:22 PM
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I like this. It's a lot said in a few words. Hugs,



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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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posted
2004-12-28
02:27 PM
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Powerful words sad, yet so very beautiful. Very much enjoyed this.
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*Alli4000*
Member Elite
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188
The World of Poetry
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posted
2004-12-28
06:19 PM
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I enjoyed this Chelsea! 
~Alli~Happy Holidays!
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