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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I heard her cry when I said good bye though I didn't see the tears she was already in heaven then but I knew she would she always did with goodbyes that were the permanent kind and she had already heard from the big guy that I would never be there to see her smile her welcome ______________ dark |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh Jesus, it it assuring to know she made it Home, but so sad, the ending lines. Stark writing, DS |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
::sounds a loss:: **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Such a sad sound, this... such a dark roue... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark, A hard rain, of pain. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
pellets which bruise the soul.... Sad write...wishing you a day filled with sunshine and warmth Morning Dark  |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Dark, your heart cries. Mine cries with you. K |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah D- a soul such as yours - of course you'll be there - I know the Big Guy - he sees more than we allow ourselves to- This is touching - moving - and I send you a great big hug - sorry for the sorrow :sqeeze: Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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