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Susan
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since 2004-03-27

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walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-01-12 03:49 PM

I tremble

beneath your word touch love

when you whisper   just     there

close to my ear

but I feel your breath upon my neck

moist with seduction

sending shiver sin ripples

d
o
  w
   n

     m
      y

        s
         p
          i
           n
            e

to pool in my belly

and release     in    a    sigh . . .

s.a.t.
If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

© Copyright 2005 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved

JL
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Texas, USA

1 posted 2005-01-12 03:51 PM

Too nice!

Excellent write Susan.

JL

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Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

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just out of reach

2 posted 2005-01-12 04:00 PM

beautifully sensual. hugs, Chris

~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

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West Coast

3 posted 2005-01-12 04:12 PM

mmmmmmmmmm nice visuals suzzz
may I write the words too
on your skin
with my whisper pen?

vandana

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4 posted 2005-01-12 04:36 PM

enjoyed

Susan
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walking the surreal

5 posted 2005-01-12 05:09 PM

Thank you friends - your replies warm my heart -

D - whisper away

Hugs - S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2005-01-12 06:34 PM

Now this is romantic...one of my favorites....James

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The World of Poetry

7 posted 2005-01-12 07:16 PM

Lovely write...

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Startime55
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Alberta, Canada

8 posted 2005-01-12 07:17 PM

Filled with sensual heat...WOW!!!

passing shadows
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displaced

9 posted 2005-01-12 07:21 PM

very nice!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

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walking the surreal

10 posted 2005-01-12 07:39 PM

Thank you friends - your replies bring me warmth on this chilly day -

Hugs - Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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