| Open Poetry #34 |
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After Storm . . . .Senryu |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass
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Wave-torn kelp in heaps Ocean shows her underwear There are crabs in them |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
giggling, love it! Well Done Mxx and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hanging on to green Kelp eyes in deeply blue seas Crabs go for the ride |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Thanks for the chuckle, the askew imagery. Poets against the war is redundant |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Giggle - loving this blue hues wave hello starfish sing the hit parade tides wave in applause SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You, silly! But, this is a good one! ....jo |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
This is hilarious I felt a need to scratch LOL Tom |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
heheheh |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Nice write! ![]() ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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suthern![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFLMAO... I wasn't anticipating the humor... but I love it!!! LOL No one does haikus/senyrus better, sir! *S* |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love this one! You are hereby confirmed to have a weird sense of humor.Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This is a hoot! You have some sense of humor!! Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed....Your sense of humor is showing and I caught it with a smile...thanks! ![]() |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
lol this is great... It's good to laugh. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
EEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWwwwwwwww....... |
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