| Open Poetry #34 |
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Sponge on the Table |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Invention brave in perspective Like snow packs melting Taking aggressive steps I am a ring for contending thoughts A positive judgment for potential Sparking insightful wings If I choose Where bridges meet Leaving behind what was memorable The spirit focuses on external history Nature and prayer’s petition Affective contemplations take my hand Composing a landscape Thus becomes an escape For the rejected Will speaks my name In a placeless time Catching the elective creating new affirmatives And where I am in this world of things It is from desolation my hand speaks The shining foil of energy In mental prayer, from which Oil oozes searing trade Smeared with barren waves I find character in morning sky An impulse to lift up all hearts eyes To feel the sharp intensity of a new Soul groping light heartedly Lifting to the next quatrain of sound Symbolic bitterness tastes my despair Where hope anticipates from morsels Soul is delivered to a final phase Leave me ferment my ways Foregoing end rhymes Entering a critical mission We are the cosmic barons…. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I find character in morning sky An impulse to lift up all hearts eyes To feel the sharp intensity of a new I wake up every morning with those thoughts in mind~~ at least I try ![]() M |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Lee, this was totally awesome! ~tier ![]() |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"cosmic baron" That you are Lee J. Excellent write! JL ![]() |
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