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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-01-31 07:06 AM

butterflys at night
with black wings
and indigo eyes

I hear them strum
the breast of a shadow
til she makes laughter

and places it under
the pillows of children
in their folded hands

_______________

dark

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-01-31 07:10 AM

A treasure.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-01-31 08:28 AM

precious...and few, are you....

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-01-31 08:44 AM

this is a

You are a keeper.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2005-01-31 09:17 AM

DarkOne~
Soft Monday *sighs* in this beauty~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email [email protected]

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2005-01-31 09:39 AM

wonderfully said Sir.....

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2005-01-31 10:30 AM

simply lovely -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2005-01-31 10:41 AM

Sweet!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2005-01-31 11:00 AM

good write

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2005-01-31 11:01 AM

Your poem wings softly in the night ~ as well as in the day!

Love & Light,
EA

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

10 posted 2005-01-31 11:03 AM

wow!

Rf

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2005-01-31 11:30 AM

neat write DS

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

12 posted 2005-01-31 05:13 PM

her sensei watches
with fingertip touch, eyes closed
she soars in his night.

The unbearable lightness of being... enjoyed this, D.

Indigo

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

13 posted 2005-01-31 10:46 PM

i love when you go all soft
(well sort of

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