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Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-01-31 09:12 PM

~~~~~~~
"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

1 posted 2005-01-31 09:42 PM

Hello demoiselle...loved this. When do you want to do a duet? Been thinking I sure would like to do one. Been practicing another style so that when it is time I can meld my words seamlessly with another. Not that I am hinting at anything...but sometimes I think a person needs a shove! LOL! Well done Snow.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2005-01-31 11:03 PM

you, can shove any time. heehee. *smirk*

~~~~~~~
"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

3 posted 2005-02-01 05:23 PM

beautifully sad......

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2005-02-01 07:54 PM

a haunting feel to this - lonely - makes me imagine something of a ghost wandering empty halls -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

5 posted 2005-02-01 10:21 PM

time for a bump...oh and check out my answer to your words sweetie lol

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-02-02 12:38 PM

you know I love this

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

7 posted 2005-02-02 12:50 PM

Yes, the harsh light of day destroys many things. Lovely write!

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

8 posted 2005-02-02 01:51 AM

This is a beautiful ache...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

9 posted 2005-02-02 06:10 AM

Whispers from within the blizzard, i hear them..i liked this ..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

10 posted 2005-02-02 06:34 AM

really nice

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2005-02-02 07:47 AM

and then I ride
up the thigh of a strange highway
to some unknown heaven
with hell words on the gate

enjoyed you snowy

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

12 posted 2005-02-02 08:21 AM

this possesses the reader....lovely

Catrina
Member

since 2004-11-10

Posts 132

13 posted 2005-02-02 11:01 AM

This stays
with the mind, Snow...

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

14 posted 2005-02-02 03:54 PM

Very nice.

JL

Opoetry4me
Member

since 2002-10-11

Posts 126
Dixon, Ky USA

15 posted 2005-02-02 04:27 PM

Beautiful...but sniff, sniff sad.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

16 posted 2005-02-02 04:35 PM

i'm glad that so many of you were able to feel this one.

thank you ALL so much for the comments.

snow

~~~~~~~
"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

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