Wasted Breath (senryu) - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #34

Wasted Breath (senryu)

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2005-02-02 01:16 PM

Reason eludes me,
moments lost of precious time.
Wasting breath on you.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Catrina
Member

since 2004-11-10

Posts 132

1 posted 2005-02-02 01:39 PM

Um, tell it like it is?

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2005-02-02 01:45 PM

POW! WOWSERS-

packs punch-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-02-02 03:14 PM

Yowwww, remind me to step outa the way

Hugs girl...

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2005-02-02 03:37 PM

Excellent write.

JL

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2005-02-02 03:43 PM

wowzer gal you need a vacation.....I know of a place.....

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-02-02 04:33 PM

yep

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

7 posted 2005-02-02 05:04 PM

OUCH!

Pity the person this is directed at.

I so enjoy this format which forces one to choose word carefully. WELL DONE...

INclan

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

8 posted 2005-02-02 06:42 PM

Enjoyed this!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.