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All That Lies In Me
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All That Lies In Me |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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All that lies in me, All that dies in me, Just to make you see. All that lies in me, All that dies in me, Everything I am resides in you, I know now what I must do. All that lies in me, All that dies in me, Fight to keep us alive, Keep you happy as I strive. All that lies in me, All that dies in me, I cannot seperate myself from you, My demise is what that would do. All that lies in me, All that dies in me, I hope you can see... That all that is in me.. All that dies in me... Is YOU. i cant taste the poison that im drinking your death is in disguise |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
powerful piece reads like a song |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
PS beat me to the comments I would make...yes, it plays like a song.  ...jo[This message has been edited by iliana (02-09-2005 12:15 AM).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Strong write here boyo |
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