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November (CBE)
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November (CBE) |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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slowly slowly another generation is passing goodbye goodbye young boys and girls flowers of the forest are closing their petals another day falters into the sea |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
yes.... it does. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yup, another day faulters into the sea enjoyed... |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Loved it. ~Laura~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely put |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Loved the way you put this...much enjoyed the read. jwesley |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
felt the CBE , four movements in total and different directions, and different colors. |
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