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Open Poetry #34

Deep Heart

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

0 posted 2004-11-02 12:57 PM

         Deep Heart

         She took what I offered
         little that I thought it was

         A reserve
         hidden in deep recess
         untouched for many years

         I hadn't realized
         that I was offering anything
         or much less what it was

         She had to tell me
         and then I knew
         I had given it away
         willingly

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

1 posted 2004-11-02 01:16 AM

Enjoyed this and what it implies.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-11-02 05:23 AM

good write

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2004-11-02 06:50 PM

Nice...James

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2004-11-02 06:54 PM

surrender without the asking

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2004-11-02 06:55 PM

Isn't it amazing
when someone who loves us
holds up a mirror
to show us why?

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2004-11-02 08:23 PM

Very beautiful beckoning here.
TD

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