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Remembrance
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Remembrance |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Eventually this is all one has of the long strong column sweating down the road. The captain in front with a cane he doesn't need. Sounds of boots, their dusty notes in unison. A short time sergeant staying out of the sun. Watching man by man marching on mile by mile through the tiger hour. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Eventually this is all one has of the long strong column sweating down the road. The captain in front with a cane he doesn't need. Sounds of boots, their dusty notes in unison. I could see this in my mind's eye, so vividly. Great write. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
war,war,war means sadness and death. though you did not say it. But I see it. |
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