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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2004-11-09 01:12 AM

                  day 244

                  I have awakened in you
                  in your indelible ink
                  and you have stained
                  a vivid tattoo

                  but I need to see
                  your eyes smiling
                  to know what we know
                  and what we do not

                  Once in awhile
                  I am without the fear
                  alone along
                  a highway somewhere

                  If I look for you
                  in my darkening mirror
                  what image will I see
                  haunting me there

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2004-11-09 05:12 AM

The first verse alone is genius.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2004-11-09 09:15 AM

now this sir... has the haunting quality one finds in something that they visit time and time again...

well done.. wish I had written this... this truly is good...

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-11-09 09:17 AM

she will be as beautiful as you see her with open arms and flowing hair...

Tremendous read....enjoy your travels...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-11-09 10:51 AM

So very beautiful...this.
*soft smiles*

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2004-11-09 10:58 AM

Krawdad

I've been reading this series of yours..sorry for not replying to all of them. This one is very touching...they all are.

myheart
Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 160
lost in your eyes

6 posted 2004-11-09 11:05 AM

intriguing & wonderful. ~myheart~

Love is the poetry of the senses. ~Honoré de Balzac

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2004-11-09 01:51 PM

Krawdad
LOL the image in your mind, enjoyed.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2004-11-09 01:55 PM

I can see it all now ~ and feel it...

EA

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

9 posted 2004-11-09 09:51 PM

I have awakened in you
in your indelible ink
and you have stained
a vivid tattoo

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