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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-11-09 08:05 AM

we held hands under the side sky
with lean too clouds
and flickered moon

you gave me your skin
said it was warm on the inside
and that I could know it

if I took the time
with the fasteners
that were not all visible

you put your hands there
over my ears
and looked into my eyes

you whispered secrets
that I couldn't hear
and told me you loved me

with everything except them

_______________

Dark

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-11-09 08:08 AM

and a very nice way to love someone, without the secrets....a new start, how invigorating, fresh and alive

You paint some very lovely pictures

Good Morning!

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

2 posted 2004-11-09 08:11 AM

Substitutions can lend some interesting travels. Great write and that last line impacts dead center target.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-11-09 08:16 AM

Zing.

More, please.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2004-11-09 10:28 AM

A lovely love feel to this, DS!

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

5 posted 2004-11-09 10:51 AM

ouch...there is a sting in this, darkie...

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-11-09 01:44 PM

Sometimes secrets are not really secrets at all, but confidances to be kept -

Love is the gift of soul - of the heart - but each of us has a dark corner where the secrets hide, meant to be unnoticed -

Lots of food for thought here - D

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-11-09 01:47 PM

Sometimes the lips say one thing...the eyes yet another.
Love this one Dark!

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2004-11-09 02:44 PM

Perhaps you couldn't hear them, but could see them in her eyes.

Wonderful writing Mr D

Mxx

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

9 posted 2004-11-09 03:39 PM

you never fail to stimulate man

missed your waytoo with words!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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