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Open Poetry #34

Twilight

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2004-11-13 01:52 AM

The cattle
in the meadow
settle down
for sleep;

their figures
as shadows
wide
and low
over autumned fields.

Now
the cow
comes to seek its rest

in milky memories

and marbled dreams.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-11-13 03:33 AM

creamy dreamy

good write

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2004-11-13 11:19 AM

You must have lived in the country...no city boy could muse on a cow at twilight! Enjoyed the quiet pastoral quality of this one John.

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

3 posted 2004-11-13 10:47 PM

LOL CREAMY DREAMY!

~Express Yourself~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-11-13 11:37 PM

The last part of this makes me think "poor cows" either milked or eaten - but so is life, hmmmm? hehe- sorry about the strange interpretation - Guess it comes from growin up around cows that were meant to be eaten eventually -

Enjoyed this -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-05-15 11:54 PM

interesting!

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