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Open Poetry #35

Camille

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-03-23 08:04 AM

A white cloud
Before the yellow sun

The blue shade
On a wide field

For a moment, at least
Life is not so hard

For an old man
On a narrow road

Beside the red poppies

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2005-03-23 09:10 AM

John, this is pure perfection.
Keepin' yet another one! Chris

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-03-23 09:18 AM

agreeing with Chris on this, tis pure perfection. Very nicely done John.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-03-23 01:00 PM

love this

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2005-03-25 12:35 PM

Oh... this is beautiful... so vivid... thank you for these images! With them... for a moment at least... life is not so hard... for me, either. *S*

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