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the moon.
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the moon. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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the smell of soap still lingers on my clothes i scrubbed myself clean of you because i felt used are your words clean and pure can you say things to me and know you've never spoken them before my mind was a blank canvas and your words the colour pallete paint me jaded i gave my world to you but you, you and your words asked for the moon |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sometimes even the moon won't be enough for them |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
exhale The put up of a put down. Strong write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If he asks for the moon ~ head for the hills! In your case, the beautiful mountains of Alberta!   EA |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Good to read you again. I'm glad to find you still strong as an oak. Your character is inspiring to me. I see that you are writing beautifully. It is always a treat to read your powerful, passionate, and touching writes. I am always rootin' for ya! Kevin |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is a very powerful, passionate, and touching write, I like it; well written too! |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
very heartfelt and passionate piece! |
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