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Open Poetry #35

Beyond the Glass

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2005-03-28 02:22 PM

Beneath the willow,
Weeping without any tear,
Watching your window
And you know not I am near
Head on your pillow;
Wind murmurs soft in your ear,
The room is shadow
I can not see, but I feel,
Dreams are just a pane from real.

Gloom

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-03-28 02:23 PM

very well done Proffessor. You still have that touch with words.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2005-03-28 02:32 PM

Thank you, Gentle One,
And you still have a way with kindness,

Gloom

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-03-28 02:54 PM

now this is nice
very touching, comforting

Alicethruglass
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

4 posted 2005-03-28 03:52 PM

Beyond the glass
behind the pane,
eyes view known
a tree barely
standing on its own.
Once a place of climbing be
on roof to rise,
a window's see
leafless of
a memory...

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2005-03-29 02:16 PM

~very sweet!

~ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2005-03-29 02:20 PM

Beautiful

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