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Open Poetry #35

Silence

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-03-30 04:28 PM

With a long gaze
The past looks back
And says goodbye

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-03-30 04:59 PM

Nothing like a little slap
of history in the face
to wake us up.

Excellent work, John.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2005-03-30 10:27 PM

  the rented rearview
                              posts a note
                   "objects in mirror are
                                            closer than they seem"

....from a very old poem of mine -- at least it seems very old unless I look at the actual amount of time that's passed....
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suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2005-03-30 10:49 PM

And if we forget...

I like this very much!!

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

4 posted 2005-03-31 06:54 AM

Thanks everyone.

RL, That's a very good poem . . .

John

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-05-01 12:27 PM

the big bang.

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