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Open Poetry #35

Child of misery by Juju

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2005-04-01 03:50 PM

Child of misery

Time's false witness
Stands before you
Watching you go
As the sand falls

Like a child
You slipt away

To patronize
Your life and death...
He laid you down
like an old dog

I hope you will
Awake reborn
And finaly
Freed from prison

Sometimes my heart breaks... and I write a poem
-JUju

[This message has been edited by Juju (04-01-2005 06:35 PM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-04-01 05:45 PM

this was sort of sad to me
I like the way you ended it

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2005-04-01 06:34 PM

Um, actually thats not the ending. the thing didn'nt do the spaces I wanted, But thankyou

Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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