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Across The While
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Across The While |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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across this mile which stretches us outreached and far just tempting us across a smile as two of us share its moment releasing us across the while this time for us we find a love completing us ... and all the while like two such dreams fitting two us "In life's giving ... love is a gift, such worth living." |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Love this Craig. Good to read you again. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice write |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thank you both ... you are both passionate hearts!!  |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
"you know I'd walk 1000 miles if I could just see you tonight...." I am reminded....always a pleasure to read you....big 'ole bear hugssss...   ME~ ~~*~~ |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
...aahhhh ... all you need to do is close your glowing eyes Lauren, and wish upon that dream .... thank you for your kind and wishful reply!! |
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StarryEyed3 Member
since 2005-06-26
Posts 58bostonia |
i like this one so much- rhyming so often sounds forced but this flows so well. can't wait to read more amazing work from you! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thank you StarE ... I have read your work too ... very good! Thanks for stopping by and I hope to see more of you.  |
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