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Open Poetry #35

Heart Severed By Silence

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2005-05-02 02:46 AM

Heart Severed By Silence

I was shredding many verses
Page after page torn apart
Reason for the incompletion
Silence had broken my heart

Pages scattered everywhere
Of love I wished to express
Maybe you understand why
Perhaps you could care less

My torn heart amongst pages
As silence tore through me
Erasing hopes and dreams
I was breaking apart tearfully

I'm left with blank white paper
Lost for words, tear stained
My heart severed by silence
Yet my love for you remained

Hope©2005

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/91/poem_735865.html

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

1 posted 2005-05-02 02:54 AM

Gosh... this is breathtaking !!!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2005-05-02 05:32 AM

Dear Hope, yes your love remained ... even if the heart is severed you hear the echoes.
This is so very touching and beautifully rendered.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2005-05-02 04:42 PM

The essence stays in your head Hope

and your being

Dave

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-05-02 04:45 PM

Hope, this is just amazing

I love that ending.

You know I can understand the pain.

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