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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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darkstar, you artisan your violence hands your chisel words shaping shaping ever fastening strings turning boys into puppets an lithium wish |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
this surprises you? lol hugging you, strings and all |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice one |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
He created me. That is all he has done. There are no strings apparent, but if you look close into my eyes you will see them skating as gossamer, a spider web of deceit blinding my sight until my final resting day when I can call myself, complete. ---------------------- You are one that can inspire me so. I think this was along the lines you were speaking of and I adore how you see things so differently than the rest of us. Thanks for the inspire, Raph . . . |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thank you. sue? i'm honoured, and that looks like a post, something you haven't done often enough |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
too cool...and loved Sue's reply here  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
That's what some fathers do you are right. Tu vai "controcorrente" and you are thought provoking. I see you as one who can open the eyes of the many puppets and remind them of their human nature, restoring dignity. Ciao Pinocchio ... Abbracci. Margherita |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
*smile* I AM posting . . . just not on the boards per se . . . Thank YOU. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
*sigh*...sometimes... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thank you all grazie margherita, that's incredible sweet of you. pieno di grazia, sei |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
God I love this Bello, you sure know how to make the reader feel and see, i saw him there working away, i could see the sweat on his brow, working hard to shape a boy into his puppet. And i could also see the boy snapping the strings later. your poem is bello, just like you.   doing the library thang  Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome !! Hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks again for the kind replies you guys are great |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
love this too.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I am the great state of mind you offered Water boundaries are sometimes Seen and not heard I am your child foundation.org But I, See what’s new And answer some of my own questions Singing along with grow songs and hopping I’m an interactive series From a mesh of intricate species… You Your lyrics really haunt the taste in my mouth Mind if I micro organize all those cats eye marbles That totally rocks my style… turning boys into puppets an lithium wish Wayyyy Kool, Loved that... |
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