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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Genesis undrape me as dawn slowly whispers at windows where darkness tenderly loses control morning is the very reason for breath to be taken away in simple touch I feel so much when your lips grace my skin come now my garden Eden’s passion expose this connection to eve next to you lays your rib |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
outstanding, gave me chills...loved this |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
powerful! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
next to you lays your rib Oh, yes. *S* This left me breathless... it's superb! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
WOW! This is fabulous! I take my Exodus... Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Anyone who can make the creation as seductive and sensual as this has my vote for Creator(ess) Great Job!!!! In the wooden chair |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
kryptonite -majnu |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
outstanding! I don't know what perfection is, but this must be close to it, if not on the mark! miscellanea |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Smiles for this....and may this Genesis never be followed by an Exodus...... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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