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Open Poetry #35

hypnagogic states

~K~
Member

since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

0 posted 2005-05-31 07:00 AM

you
are too kind
as usual
you plunge
the knife with
so little enthusiasm
as I blunder into
your delusions
I see my sickness
through your eyes
I see that
I am the stain
the inconvenience
the fate of every
disenchanted traveler
I am the rusted hinges
on the gift unopened
cast off & unwanted
synaptic pathways
severed
and rerouted
I wonder
who is
the dreamer

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-05-31 07:34 AM

compelling

well done!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2005-05-31 09:46 AM

this one ripped me open, excellent, as always

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-06-09 09:51 AM

I think this
belongs back at the top...

Good work here, ~K~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2005-06-09 10:03 AM

totally gripping words.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

5 posted 2005-06-09 10:56 AM

I do like your style of writing.

~tier

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2005-06-09 11:02 AM

Delivers surgical cuts...without anaesthetic.

Well done.

CG

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