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Open Poetry #35

fcy fcy fcy

Beki
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2005-06-03 07:00 AM

falling asleep -
cricketsong for lullaby,
your hand on my cheek

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-06-03 07:10 AM

oh...nice one

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2005-06-03 07:49 AM

nice thoughts and images summed up perfectly in three lines.

lovely!

~tier

Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

3 posted 2005-06-03 04:36 PM

I really like this one...

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-06-03 04:39 PM

awwww, enjoyed

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

5 posted 2005-06-05 04:38 PM

Muy Hermosa chica! Me encanta ese poema! Cada palabra me toca como las manos de me amante. Que Bonita!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

6 posted 2005-06-07 02:05 PM

thanks everyone, I do appreciate your reading and commenting

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