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writing in the spa |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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writing in the spa erase a line send another school of tiny eraser fish drifting what will the filter think? |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I am so enjoying the way your mind works.... Cool write!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat write |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
That depends. *S* If the filter secretly yearns for wild celebrity spa parties, it's probably sighing that there was a shipping mixup. *S* However... if it appreciates goodness and beauty... it's wondering how a lowly filter could ever get so lucky as to read your words... trips to the bookstore are beyond it, yanno. *G* Okay... forgive my bratty response, please. *S* This is so lovely and led my thoughts down many pathways... unfortunately... the fingers decided to play rather than ponder. LOL I'm with iliana... I do love the way your mind works! *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Smiling at this... and you.  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed I'm trying to envision how you keep your paper dry....I can see those little bits of poems that you erased going into the skimmer. Enjoyed!  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Can picture the jets heating up and starting to cool at the same time. Wonderful use of your imagination, Ratleader~ |
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