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kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

0 posted 2005-02-27 10:17 AM

Pink dawn happening
Rays spread like flower petals
Greying clouds hover

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2005-02-27 10:22 AM

very nice. yes, those clouds for us contain more snow I am afraid. hugs, Chris

Love can sometimes be magic. But magic can sometimes... just be an illusion.
~ Javan

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2005-02-27 10:23 AM

I like this very much!
I think one too many syllables in last line (if writing a senryu)

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

3 posted 2005-02-27 10:32 AM

Thank you, Chris, your presence is always a present.

Interloper: Thank you for your keen eye! and for signing

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-02-27 10:34 AM

Clouds covering state
Emotions coloring time
All a rosy hue

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

5 posted 2005-02-27 11:43 AM

Pretty. I'd never thought of rays spreading like flower petals--I like!

miscellanea

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2005-02-27 11:45 AM

soft sunrise colors
muted into pastel hues
springtime does prevail

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2005-02-27 11:47 AM

The sun is soon up
visiting this side of day
good morning to you

Hi Ken!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2005-02-27 11:49 AM

Wonderful one Ken!!
We have snow clouds moving in tonight.
Hey..a sunny day today though!

~Hugs & Smiles to you m'friend~

~ The most beautiful poem ever written..
was written by you in my heart ~

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

9 posted 2005-02-27 11:54 AM

Greying skies gather
Precipitation threatens
Oregon sunshine

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2005-02-27 05:40 PM

morning described perfectly here

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2005-02-28 06:33 AM

sounds beautiful to me~~~

M

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