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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Given a look into a half full glass observe where liquid has passed the height of the fluid determines that empty space; one recalls what folly erased. Water passed under the bridge flowed from the glass over the ridge; the height of the liquid met its decline one recalls how life was fine. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed *smiling at this* |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
I understand this Martin,walking that fine line right now where life to me seems closer to half empty rather than half full~~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
insight always a sheer delight My spirit will rise |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
 I liked this piece a lot.Poetry is beauty in words. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
This is excellent, needs to be bumped back up. Hope others appreciate your talent as much as I do... ____________ice ><> |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Ice, At least some members do; then again I'm not here to please everybody Martin |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Writer, your poem is quite profound and philosophically poetic. It is good to read you again, Wise One!  EA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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