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Open Poetry #35

I broke my heart

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2005-03-06 11:37 PM

I broke my heart

I found my self in a wreck
My mind is a nebulous
A threshold for trouble.

My ego just exploded
Now I'm collecting myself
Picking up the confettii

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

1 posted 2005-03-06 11:44 PM

awe

I liked this though

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

2 posted 2005-03-07 12:31 PM

Great writing

Andrew

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2005-03-07 01:38 PM

Yes, very nice.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-03-07 04:15 PM

Careful...James

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

5 posted 2005-03-08 10:30 AM

I like this...can relate well

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2005-03-08 11:28 AM

good one...of which we could all say, been there, felt that...

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2005-03-08 03:08 PM

Well done, enjoyed.
Chris

"Nunc scio quit sit amor."
~ Virgil

Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

8 posted 2005-03-08 03:09 PM

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

9 posted 2005-03-08 07:18 PM

Thank you.

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