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Open Poetry #35

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2005-03-07 09:02 PM

If spoken word of today
were in yesterdays of past
Proclaimed in words I want to say
I surely would have laughed

If story told in passing
in moons that beamed before
Exspressive in our passion
I would have smiled more

But if this tale were woven
then there wouldn't be a tear
in knowig that forever more
I'll never hold you near

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2005-03-07 09:24 PM

Very much enjoyed. Chris

"Nunc scio quit sit amor."
~ Virgil

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2005-03-07 11:17 PM

Nice...James

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

3 posted 2005-03-08 11:28 AM

A beautiful "if"

Truly enjoyed reading your thoughts.

sadie

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-03-08 11:32 AM

beautifully expressed....heart breakingly true sometimes

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

5 posted 2005-03-08 01:04 PM

Lovely meter in this one. And it made me smile, sadly.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-03-08 01:10 PM

Beautiful bittersweet write..
Much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

7 posted 2005-03-08 02:42 PM

Thanks for all the comments. It's been over a year that I have written anything... I was a bit nervous to come back..
: )
~~Connie~~

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