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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-03-08 08:50 PM


How bravely yellow
this little bird
            
that flits across
from branch to branch

lighting candles
with its wings
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wandering glider
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aloft
1 posted 2005-03-08 08:57 PM

yes
black wicks
and yellow flames
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2 posted 2005-03-08 11:09 PM

I bought a finch feeder the other day, just so I could see them more often..... love that bird.

.....and this....captures a bit of his spirit!

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Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-05-01 01:58 PM

beautiful, very beautiful. How you observe such a scene?!!!

there are many pictures of the 6 lines.
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