How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Sanctuary Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives

A home without a wall,
Our haven without ends,
A circle we all call
Our Family of Friends!

navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #35 » Picture Window
Open Poetry #35
Post A Reply Post New Topic Picture Window Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Huan Yi
Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
0 posted 2005-03-13 02:28 PM


Monsoon—
A constant rain
encloses the world

Ditches fill
beside the roads
The river becomes a muddy flood
that rushes out to sea

Lightning bolts
across the sky
Birds seek shelter
among the trees

A small
black squirrel
shakes the water
off its fur

and gets included
in a poem
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-03-13 03:52 PM

Great imagery..much enjoyed the read.

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul
TexUS
Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228
2 posted 2005-03-13 10:24 PM

You took me there.  
Truly enjoyed this!
Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
3 posted 2007-05-01 01:42 PM

ugly peace in uglier war.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #35 » Picture Window

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary