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Open Poetry #35

in a frame

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2005-03-15 08:52 AM

Sunshine lining,
and apple shadows.
Leaves colored it seems.
Evening subtle in one tear,
I feel you on my face.
Talk to me, as dew to frost.
To visit,
can you stay a year-
Leave me lost,
holding hands with time.
In a frame, so
only the cast can hear.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-03-15 08:55 AM

this is so beautiful, but yet I feel a sense of longing and sadness. It made me feel, and that IS poetry. Well done.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-03-15 09:04 AM

felt this wanton...you paint emotions well.

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