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Open Poetry #36

September

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-09-05 03:15 AM

Late at night
Slowly stars—

Even now
I raise my eyes

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

1 posted 2005-09-05 10:20 AM

This is a lovely little piece, packs quite a punch. I never managed to do anything with so few words.. you certainly have a talent. Keep looking up..

Love's a lovely lad
His bringing up is beauty
Who loves him not is mad
For I must pay him duty
-Anonymous

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

2 posted 2005-09-11 10:08 PM

2 words for ya on this ... Short and Sweet...

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

3 posted 2005-09-11 10:12 PM

Short piece but beautifully written.

Poetry is beauty in words.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-09-11 10:26 PM

Now this is beautiful!!!

I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay
I wait and listen or put a seashell
to my ear and it all comes back
the wind's soft murmur..and you.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-04-26 04:31 PM

homesick.

You have many Septembers in your calander. I can not find mine.

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