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Open Poetry #36

Just to Look

sim0riah
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

0 posted 2005-09-28 12:51 PM

So as the day comes to an end
I hope you remember
That in my heart you are
From me to you the miles are long
But my eyes can always see you
at the horizon or just beyond.
A special trip should we take
For a subtle kiss we could make
To taste your soul I would love
To hold you dear as the stars rise
Just to look in your beautiful eyes

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

1 posted 2005-09-28 01:07 PM

wow simply wow

-may the force be with you in poetry

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

2 posted 2005-09-28 04:55 PM

very good. very sweet too..

thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

3 posted 2005-09-28 07:00 PM

Nice words

Bodger

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