LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2005-09-29
09:09 AM
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winter cloths hanging on a hook darkness gloats flashes of fatima against heartbroken mirrors naming Egyptian shamans, the mightiest of men writing calligraphy across my achilles like an encyclopedia, with magik expression gutting my closed bedroom door white flaked avalanches erasing narrow, saw toothed clamoring storms into candles that flicker heat waves like an old friend, tender voiced
an underworld playing hide and seek flooded, with kingdoms to rummage around nursing transitions, fingerprints Orion secrets, unlocking ancient maps dreams made of flesh with a tiger eye mind handfeeds coincidence, brilliant blue waters imbuing realism, truth, placed in a pouch of flames with chestnut colored hair… in a midsummer apron with aphrodite design a paranormal suburban house gives birth to a city child
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Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
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2005-09-29
09:37 AM
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Lee~
'truth, placed in a pouch of flames with chestnut colored hair… in a midsummer apron with aphrodite design a paranormal suburban house gives birth to a city child'
You've unlocked some poignant, contemplative thoughts this morning~
Thank you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~
~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))><
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
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California
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2005-09-29
11:51 AM
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"like an encyclopedia, with magik expression"
Those words describe you, dear LeeJ. 
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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
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2005-09-29
12:03 PM
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A magical blend of the mystical past and present day suburbia.
Enjoy your day, poetess!  Linda
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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
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2005-09-29
12:56 PM
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quote: fingerprints with Orion secrets, unlocking ancient maps
... shamans and paranormal suburban houses ... touched by your acrobatic pen ... a treat!
Love, Margherita
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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
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2005-09-29
01:21 PM
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Almost like a map
Nice to see
Bodger
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Sharksbean
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since 2005-09-25
Posts 368
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2005-09-29
02:16 PM
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i didnt understand half of what you were saying but it is a very nice write thank you so much for sharing this 
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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
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2005-09-29
02:31 PM
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LeeJ You dance in a garden of symbols without music. Enjoyed
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
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2005-09-29
02:34 PM
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*Smiling at Seymour's reply*
This is excellent Lee! Oh to have a mind like yours! Hugs dear lady~~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~
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garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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Florida, USA
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2005-09-29
03:28 PM
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like an encyclopedia, with magik expression
Sweet lady, I agree with what Martie said... this does describe you. Thank you for sharing your mind, as well as your heart with us. Hugs, Ethel

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iliana
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USA
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2005-09-30
12:50 PM
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"dreams made of flesh with a tiger eye mind handfeeds coincidence"
So many good lines....hard a hard time picking LeeJ. I find I have to really do some thinking with your poetry, which is good.....that's what exceptional poetry requires! ....jo
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