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In the Shadows |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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In the Shadow In the shadows of my mind Underneath a thin skinned rind Runs an appaloosa wild Like the cravings of a child It runs a zigzag woven lace Impossible from place to place Heedless of the field of crop Beyond the ear shot call of stop It seeks the corners black of night Where seems to hide a treasures plight Chases out the bats of dwell Regardless of the waves or smell Challenges the realm of real With just the sward of self appeal And in the spirit of the flight Finds itself a black of sight And if you live this state of rump It clears a field and pulls a stump |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good mornin', T-Man! Yer a wild one, ain't ya!?!    EA |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'Where seems to hide a treasures plight' And a TREASURE is exactly what you *gift* us with~ Thank you for being a poet true~ I know I like the likes of YOU~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In the shadows of my mind Underneath a thin skinned rind Runs an appaloosa wild Like the cravings of a child ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ that verse just made me smile at your wild horse wile oh you know the magic when horses and dragons get together  Had a few mins to come seek out the wisdom and light of me sweet Sybabers... And if you live this state of rump It clears a field and pulls a stump and there it is!!! I will write soon and update ya.. Im still running up and down the highway taking care of lil seeestur... but taking lots of pics as I do, will send some soon. *winkiewinkie*   |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This one goes down as one of my very favorites. You are amazing Love Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel You don't do so bad yourself. Marge, You are a sweetheart. JM, You made my heart jump to see your comment. WW Elizabeth, Hugs and kisses for this reply. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You never fail to stir my imagination with your posts Sy! This one is no exception. Wonderful write this morn. Hugs~Nancy ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Please tell me over tea. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Much enjoyed Seymour. Have a wonderful day! hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, You are a joy. |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
nice write thanks for sharing  -may the force be with you in poetry |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "In the shadows of my mind Underneath a thin skinned rind Runs an appaloosa wild Like the cravings of a child" One of the many sides of Sy...I like them all! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharksbean Thank you for the read. Martie You are a love. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 I particularly liked the choice of the "appaloosa" -- seems so appropriate. Much enjoyed this galloping! ......jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Beautiful picture and reply, thank you |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
trying to catch up here with your humble words  My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES You are welcome what ever and when ever. Thank you |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Seymore choosing words to describe you work gets to be a chore sometimes. For this one I choose Noble. This is my favorite of your wonderful writes that I've been priviledged to read. Thank you kind sir! |
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Obsidian Snow Member
since 2005-08-24
Posts 88 |
What you write never fails to make me smile. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
StevenS You do me honor, I thank you. Obsidian Snow A smile is just beyond a wile. Thank you |
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