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Open Poetry #36

October

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-10-06 07:08 AM

October—
leaves on clear water
sailing

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-10-06 08:49 AM

ohhhh, how beautiful!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2005-10-06 04:18 PM

nice simple autumn imagery, John

DennisTheMenace
Member

since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

3 posted 2005-10-06 07:52 PM

Huh?
October just got here and u rushing it 2 leave
howz about

October,
Comes on raindrops
Lightly damp

?
anyway love the mood you set wiff words

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-04-25 03:29 PM

why you have to write like this?
October-fall, cool, blue sky, mild weather.
Leaves-lifes partialy finished.
clear water-quiet, clear mind, mood, heart,eyes.
sailing--soft wind. the moving tickled the soul.

In plain words means tasteless.

You know, I feel so good to talk to a living poet, a great poet.

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