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Open Poetry #36

evoked thoughts from a photo

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2005-07-12 12:33 PM

not feeling
the camera on you,
you smile wrily
to yourself

you seem
the go-getter
kinda gal,
the sort who cherishes
outrageous fun and
days well lived

but,
how can I know for sure?

your smile
intrigues and teases me,
like that of
a smug cat
savouring its mouse conquest

determined to unravel
your layers
in your own good time

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-07-12 02:52 PM

very pretty poem

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2005-07-12 05:18 PM

your smile
intrigues and teases me,

enjoyed your words and determination in the end~~

M

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2005-07-12 09:24 PM

It's amazing what you can capture on film
...or in words, when the subject isn't aware
of your gaze.

But kaile, you know how to change that lack of awareness problem, right?

Go for it, let yourself be OBVIOUS.

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